Course 2

Feedback on your Story/Screenplay

Feedback on your Story/Screenplay

Get clear, actionable feedback on your story or screenplay from a professional writer and storyteller. Understand what’s working, what’s not, and how to make your story more powerful, emotional, and production-ready.

Get clear, actionable feedback on your story or screenplay. Understand what’s working, what’s not, and how to make your story more powerful, emotional, and pitch-ready.

Before you book

This course is for you if:

This course is for you if:

This course is for you if:

You've written a story or screenplay and want honest, professional eyes on it before you send it out

You've written a story or screenplay and want honest, professional eyes on it before you send it out

You've gotten feedback from friends and family, but "it's nice" isn't helping you improve

You've gotten feedback from friends and family, but "it's nice" isn't helping you improve

You feel something isn't working in your draft, but you can't put your finger on what

You feel something isn't working in your draft, but you can't put your finger on what

You want specific, actionable notes, not vague opinions

You want specific, actionable notes, not vague opinions

How We’ll Work Together

In-person Session: Duration: 2 sessions of 2 Hrs | Schedule: Saturdays & Sundays

What You’ll Get

• Detailed Written Feedback on your story/script (up to 20 pages)

• Analysis of structure, pacing, character depth, theme, and dialogue

• Suggestions for improvement in clarity, emotion, and cinematic flow

• Follow-up support for one month of clarifications

Ideal For

• Writers developing short stories, short films, or features

• Anyone who wants an honest, professional critique before pitching or producing

• Storytellers who feel stuck or unsure about their script’s flow

Format

• Mode: Online Zoom call

• Turnaround Time: 5–7 working days after submission

• Pages Accepted: Up to 20 (extra pages at an add-on fee)

Outcome

A clear direction on how to strengthen your story - making it more engaging, focused, and ready for readers or the screen.

Your mentor

Hiren Madhukar

Hiren Madhukar

Hiren Madhukar

Creative director, storyteller, and founder of Unfold Words.

Creative director, storyteller, and founder of Unfold Words.

A creative director and storyteller with 25 years in Indian advertising and design. A member of the Screenwriters Association of India, I have worked across brand narratives, screenwriting, and live storytelling. I founded Unfold Words to give Indian writers the structured craft foundation that most writing courses skip - one rooted in both Indian storytelling tradition and global screen craft.

A creative director and storyteller with 25 years in Indian advertising and design. A member of the Screenwriters Association of India, I have worked across brand narratives, screenwriting, and live storytelling. I founded Unfold Words to give Indian writers the structured craft foundation that most writing courses skip - one rooted in both Indian storytelling tradition and global screen craft.

A creative director and storyteller with 25 years in Indian advertising and design. A member of the Screenwriters Association of India, I have worked across brand narratives, screenwriting, and live storytelling. I founded Unfold Words to give Indian writers the structured craft foundation that most writing courses skip - one rooted in both Indian storytelling tradition and global screen craft.

25 years in advertising & design

SWA India member

Founder of Unfold Words

₹7,500 | 2 Live Zoom Sessions of 2 Hrs | Hindi & English

₹7,500 | 2 Live Zoom Sessions of 2 Hrs | Hindi & English

₹7,500 | 2 Live Zoom Sessions of 2 Hrs | Hindi & English

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11 July 26

11 July 26

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