Course 2

Course 2

Feedback on your Story/Screenplay

Feedback on your Story/Screenplay

Get clear, actionable feedback on your story or screenplay from a professional writer and storyteller. Understand what’s working, what’s not, and how to make your story more powerful, emotional, and production-ready.

Get clear, actionable feedback on your story or screenplay. Understand what’s working, what’s not, and how to make your story more powerful, emotional, and pitch-ready.

How We’ll Work Together

In-person Session: Duration: 1 session of 2-3 Hrs | Schedule: Saturdays & Sundays

What You’ll Get

• Detailed Written Feedback on your story/script (up to 20 pages)

• Analysis of structure, pacing, character depth, theme, and dialogue

• Suggestions for improvement in clarity, emotion, and cinematic flow

• Follow-up support for one month of clarifications

Ideal For

• Writers developing short stories, short films, or features

• Anyone who wants an honest, professional critique before pitching or producing

• Storytellers who feel stuck or unsure about their script’s flow

Format

• Mode: Online Zoom call

• Turnaround Time: 5–7 working days after submission

• Pages Accepted: Up to 20 (extra pages at an add-on fee)

Outcome

A clear direction on how to strengthen your story - making it more engaging, focused, and ready for readers or the screen.